Pretty good work bret, you should put up a portfolio.
Any particular reason you are using background with the logo ?
that mountain as a backdrop is a bit distracting. would be nice to set the logo against a black background...im thinking in style of minamalism, or a black background with recessed features -like cube design (checkerboard)
Reminds me of radical street art. Do you have Tumblr? I'd love to see stuff you draw