2013-05-19, 06:43 PM
http://edmundreed.co.uk/bootstrap/
The colors you used in the landing page there are wonderful but the layout is hard to focus or rather focus is not being managed. what I mean is when you update everything, perhaps consider going for a presentation approach that doesn't give many points of focus but rather capture visitor focus to one primary area and maybe with use of composition lines or layout to one or two more areas after that. Just an idea.. from a critique perspective. Other than that great job.
The colors you used in the landing page there are wonderful but the layout is hard to focus or rather focus is not being managed. what I mean is when you update everything, perhaps consider going for a presentation approach that doesn't give many points of focus but rather capture visitor focus to one primary area and maybe with use of composition lines or layout to one or two more areas after that. Just an idea.. from a critique perspective. Other than that great job.